Hmph!!!!! (Sweet Lolita Fashion)

Hello! This is my first critique. (I hope I do not seem harsh!)

First, it is very good that you do not use lots of hair accessories. They are very pretty and well-placed. The colours used in the wig complement the rest of the outfit well. However, I would not recommend wearing hairbands and a wristband on your wrist as these items are not considered 'Lolita'.

As mentioned before, this is a jumper-skirt, therefore a blouse should be worn underneath. I recommend a white blouse with not too many frills.

While the colours used in the dress and bag are quite pretty, there is too much lace on the dress. One of the most important rules of Lolita fashion is not to wear too much lace. Lace used should be of high quality, and used sparingly, if not at all. The trim of the jumper-skirt is very pretty and ornate.

The background of the picture is very calm and suits the picture very well.

Makeup has been used sparingly, and has been done well.

Another good point is that mainly three colours have been used in the outfit, so all components of the outfit blend in together well.

This may sound weird, but it is also good that a petticoat with enough volume was worn. When some people try to wear Lolita fashion, they do not wear a petticoat at all! A petticoat is very important.

Finally, the model used is very pretty.